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im just starting to write lyrics and was wondering if i was any good or not

The days grow old
the suns light dull and diminished
your words as lifeless as the carcass you drag around

Why does it feel
Like I've heard those words before
Seen this scene before
Smelt your fears before

beasts scour the land
feeding off the mindless drones
Their hollow skulls provide a taste of nothing new

Why does it feel
Like I've heard those words before
Seen this scene before
Smelt your fears before

The days grow old
The night takes hold
It's grip oh so cold
As it takes hold of your throat


and thats all i got tell me what you think
Last edited by burns562 at Jul 2, 2010,