#1
Just finished up this instrumental. You can either listen to it on my profile, or here.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M9csxQVYmRk
The timing on the intro taps is a bit off, but everything else is spot on. I'd like to know what you guys think about the composition and how everything flows. C4C of course, and subscribe to me on YouTube. There will be many more videos to come.

You, good sir, have not gone over to your friends house after a hard night of drinking to find 2 dudes passed out in the same room both holding their own flaccid cocks in hand, passed out, with porn on the tv.
#4
Nice! Start builds up very nicely to the rest of the piece, then the sweeps at 1.20 ish are awesome! Tone on your guitar is perfect, what recording equip do you use?
I like the harmonies you've used throughout the piece, they compliment the melody nicely and are at just the right volume. Drums could be made a bit more interesting in my opinion, they sound a bit generic.
The change at around 2.46 is great! My favourite bit of the entire piece!

Keep it up!

Comment on mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1332727
#5
Thanks!

I run my Micro Cube into my Tascam DP02-CF and I use my 90's sony stereo as monitors.

You, good sir, have not gone over to your friends house after a hard night of drinking to find 2 dudes passed out in the same room both holding their own flaccid cocks in hand, passed out, with porn on the tv.
#6
Very nice dude. Sounds a little Gary Moore-esque. Some lovely sweeps and a great tone too. Can't wait to hear more.

If you find time please check out some of the demo tracks I have posted on my UG profile.

All the best!
#7
Thanks for checking out my song.

Wow, this is some awesome stuff. The playing is great. I love harmonized lead parts and yours sound amazing. The leads are all awesome; not flashy and scale-regurgitated at all, just all-well placed notes and excellent playing.

I really don't have anything to criticize about, but one suggestion is to maybe lower the volume of the drum track, it overpowers the guitars a little bit imo. And if you could also add a little reverb to the drums to make it sound more natural I think it would help out.

I also checked out a couple of your other songs in your profile - all good stuff. Keep it up.
#8
The intro made me automatically have low hopes for the song. Sounded very, ugh. The lead guitars came in, and then the harmony, which was very nice. The little continuous run that goes on around :40 somethin' was great. The rest is history, as the song drives on VERY well and all the licks used are epic. I'm gonna NEED you to teach me how to sweep, as those sweeps sounded so beautiful and clean. I added you on YT, so if you see me! ITS ME! lmao

Great song though man, very much enjoyed it.

if you get a chance, stop by my thread, although I fear it isn't nearly as well thought out as this.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1333801
#9
Thanks man. I know the intro taps are off. I'm probably going to fix those tonight.

If you have a webcam, I can show you how to sweep if you want.

You, good sir, have not gone over to your friends house after a hard night of drinking to find 2 dudes passed out in the same room both holding their own flaccid cocks in hand, passed out, with porn on the tv.
#11
Honestly, other than the drums being a tad bit too loud (or the guitars being a bit too low, which ever you prefer haha) I really enjoyed it. Even though the drums might be a bit generic as stated above, they make it so that it's got a very peaceful mood to it, in my ears atleast, and it's a nice one too! Nice harmonies etc etc, a couple of bends sounded iffy, but nothing big. Very smooth overall, good job :P

If you feel froggy enough, for you sir;
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1334397