#1
C4C.

Open the doors of perception,
let chemicals give the directions,
I could cure all your man made infections,
as age takes the chisel,
to your imperfect perfections.

Patience is a virtue,
and it still wants to hurt you,
as the IV tunnels collapse,
virtue's are harder to grasp.

Please stand out side in the waiting room,
organs aren't worth more than courtesy.

[Chorus]
Fingertips closed up,
eyelids welded shut.
bone saw sharpened,
stainless steel bedpan.
Novocains cheaper,
cut open the keeper,
catheters broken,
written word spoken,
were right behind the eyes,
were right behind the eyes.
[Chorus]

Think before you speak,
and speak after you think,
think before you speak,
and speak after your thought of.

Threat of emotion,
prophylaxes potions,
speak more than me,
these gowns weren't made for stains.

Please stand out side in the waiting room,
organs aren't worth more than courtesy.

[Chorus]
Fingertips closed up,
eyelids welded shut.
bone saw sharpened,
stainless steel bedpan.
Novocains cheaper,
cut open the keeper,
catheters broken,
written word spoken,
were right behind the eyes,
were right behind the eyes.
[Chorus]

Self controlled emotions,
taught by the motion of boredom.

Self controlled devotion,
preached by the motion of boredom.

Self controlled emotions,
taught by the motion of boredom.

Self controlled devotion,
preached by the motion of boredom.

[Chorus]
Fingertips closed up,
eyelids welded shut.
bone saw sharpened,
stainless steel bedpan.
Novocains cheaper,
cut open the keeper,
catheters broken,
written word spoken,
were right behind the eyes,
were right behind the eyes.
[Chorus]
Quote by herby190
When I saw that, I thought of musical notes.... my elementary school teachers taught them as "tee-tees" "ta-tas" and a bunch of other nonsense....
Last edited by Ir a+infinitive at Jul 4, 2010,
#2
Interesting...

I really liked this (Y) Well done

I think that your 'Self controlled emotion...' part was very well written and the substitution of words was pretty clever. I also liked your link between the biological heart and the 'emotional heart' was very clever too.

The only thing that I dislike is 'Think before you speak...' etc. I think your idea is good but I don't personally like the second repitition. It sounds forced or something :L

Anyway, well done Es ist sehr gud!!


There is no revenge so complete as forgiveness
#3
thank you, what did you think the meaning was?
Quote by herby190
When I saw that, I thought of musical notes.... my elementary school teachers taught them as "tee-tees" "ta-tas" and a bunch of other nonsense....