#1
C4C.

This is a revision of a piece I wrote quite a long time ago.

Day to day, it's all the same,
and all we crave is yesterday.
Day to night, it's all that's left,
this crushing nothing on my chest.

Day in, day out, I scream, I shout,
hot in the head, cold to the touch.
Weakness makes me feel so tough,
hating what I love so much.

When you're close I feel so alone,
to know my house is not a home.
Expressionless, eyes void and null,
mind so sharp but wits so dull.

Day in, day out, I scream, I shout,
hot in the head, cold to the touch.
Weakness makes me feel so tough,
hating what I love so much.

So much!
So much!
So much!
So much!

All I know....
All I know....
All I know....
All I know....

All I know is repetition;
all I know is contradiction.
all I know has been burned to ash,
all that's left is charred so black.

Day in, day out, I scream, I shout,
hot in the head, cold to the touch.
Weakness makes me feel so tough,
hating what I love so much.

Day in, day out, I scream, I shout,
hot in the head, cold to the touch.
Weakness makes me feel so tough,
hating what I love so much.

So much!
So much!
So much!
So much!

So much......
#2
Wow, sounds like home.... just kidding lol.

The wording and structure are very good.
The lyrics flow well.
I hope it's not true.

I actually like it. I see some tallent here.

Take care,
jody
#3
Herby, thats good. Really mean it. Since I don`t prefer some metalcore and other extreme genres, it reminds me a "Just killing time" by Black Label Society.

Cheers. Ace.
#4
Good structure and flow and sounds familiar to alot of people i know lol.
I even like the use of repetition which is something i usually avoid, it is a well written piece, nice one.
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