#1
Ummm okay, this is 2 verses and the chorus I have written for my first song to be written for my 30 day album challenge.

Criticism is welcome

V1

There were times when you would say
your love is all i need today
The time has gone and don't look back
you know everything will fade to black

Chorus

I'll be there for you
When they take away your crown
I'll be there for you
when the sky comes falling down

V2

You know those things that you left behind
your emotions and time out of mind
I hope you do want you want to do
Forget all this and see it through
#2
I like it, short and simple gets the message across well. The first verse and the chorus flow well but I can't quite get the second to roll of my tongue naturally. It's those middle two lines that just don't quite work for me.
My suggestion is:

You know those things that you left behind,
you emotions and timed out mind (not really sure but I'll edit it if I think of something better)
I hope you do what you want to do,
forget all this and see it through.