#1
Finished this up earlier today. I'm pleased with it for the most part, but some parts sound a little iffy. I might have it a little too busy in some parts. I'm also for title suggestions, I'm not too good with coming up with them.

Thanks.

Called 'Untitled' in my profile. C4C
#2
Quote by calnix
Finished this up earlier today. I'm pleased with it for the most part, but some parts sound a little iffy. I might have it a little too busy in some parts. I'm also for title suggestions, I'm not too good with coming up with them.

Thanks.

Called 'Untitled' in my profile. C4C


Very fun feel! I couldnt help but sing that song "Its not unusual to be loved by anyone.. Its not unusual to have fun with anyone..." Dont know its name.. But thats where it took me.. VERY fun feel love it!

C4C?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1331822

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1332054
#3
Haha, love that guitar sound at the start - and the harmonies are very fun! Very professionally mixed through my headphones, so good job there.
Good layering of guitars, fun feel to it from the very beginning and onwards.

I don't know, I expected some vocals, not a lead guitar - but nice to see what you've done there. Unexpected, but nice!
1.23 is particularly nice, as a variation.

I like how you've make good use of palm mutes to add a more percussive sound to the entire mix. Great stuff! When I heard this, I thought 'Beach' or 'Something in the Sun' - think of those when naming


C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1332727
#4
Thanks for the comments, I commented in each of your threads.

I was wondering about the mix - it seems to fluctuate from overpowered rhythm to overpowered bass etc throughout to me, I don't I stayed very consistent with the levels while recording it. I'm gonna mess around with it some more.

As far as lyrics go, I am certainly not a vocalist and definitely not a lyric writer...I find it hard enough just to come up with names for my songs haha. It does have a beach/summer and outdoorsy feel to it, I'll probably go with a name somewhere along those lines. Thanks again.
#5
I want to run around in the sun naked on a big ass field of grass and flowers with this on my mp3 haha =D Such a joy to listen to, love the chords, the melodies, everything. This isn't much of a critique obviously, but I couldn't find anything tbh and wanted to just drop my thoughts in here anyway :P
#7
Dude. Just. Dude. Awesome sound, great use of what I assume is auto wah. It reminds me of my second week of college, when I met all my friends and it wasn't nasty out yet, kinda reminds me a LOT of any sunshine stages in Sonic games. I love those stages! Its wonderfully done, but some of the notes in the first portion of your solo fit oddly. Perhaps just one tone down would've worked better? LOVE it!

Take a listen to this. Its something completely different:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1335543