#1
Hi I'm a pretty moderate guitar player and I'm trying to learn/ improve from songs to make a song that I can play for the family and my girlfriend and I just wanted to know if anyone has any ideas to help me improve this song right so for the intro this is what I have (yeah it starts like stairway to heaven)
also please dont make fun of my tabbing skills im new at this lol
E -------5-7-5-------|- ----787-------2-|-----5-7-5-----|-------5---7--------|
B -----5-------5----- |----5-------5-----|----5-------5---|-----5-----5--------|
G ---5-----------5--- |--5-----------5--|---5----------5--|---5-------5------|
D -7----------------- |5----------------|-3----------------|-------------------|
A ------------------- |-----------------|-------------------|-7-----------------|
E ------------------- |-----------------|-------------------|--------------------|
________________________________________________________

E -------5-7-5-------|- ----787-------2-|-----5-7-5-----|-----5-------5-------|
B -----5-------5----- |----5-------5-----|----5-------5---|-----5-------5------|
G ---5-----------5--- |--5-----------5--|---5----------5--|----5-------5------|
D -7--------------- - |5----------------|-4----------------|--3------2-----------|
A ----------------- - |-----------------|-------------------|------------------|
E ------------------ |-----------------|-------------------|--------------------|

that sucks i know but its the best i have right now for the song but is there anything you can help to add ono to this song or some songs i can go by that would go along with this or can be improved from? any help is highly appreciated and will be accredited for.
#2
How can we tell the note durations? They're all 8th notes? And what tempo is it at?
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#3
I apoligize man for my lack of knowledge im still learning that stuff butit should be about the same tempo as stairway to heaven i mean im just going at it with this all i really need help with is building it so its like a song. I'm sorry again for my lack of knowledged but if anyone is going to tell me to set the guitar down im not because ive learned alot of songs and i continue to play but i will look up on this later and get back to you
[ edit ok i feel stupid >.<] h=half note,
E -------5-7-5-------|- ----787-------2-|-----5-7-5-----|-------5---7h--------|
B -----5-------5----- |----5-------5-----|----5-------5---|-----5-----5h--------|
G ---5-----------5--- |--5-----------5--|---5----------5--|---5-------5h------|
D -7----------------- |5----------------|-3----------------|-------------------|
A ------------------- |-----------------|-------------------|-7-----------------|
E ------------------- |-----------------|-------------------|--------------------|after you play the last part to this you pause the play
__________________________________________________ ______

E -------5-7-5-------|- ----7-8-7-------2-|-----5-7-5-----|-----5h-------5h-------|
B -----5-------5----- |----5-------5-----|----5-------5---|-----5h-------5h------|
G ---5-----------5--- |--5-----------5--|---5----------5--|-----5h-------5h------|
D -7--------------- - |5----------------|-4----------------|--3---------2-----------|
A ----------------- - |-----------------|-------------------|------------------|
E ------------------ |-----------------|-------------------|--------------------|
right i dont think this helped much but yea
Last edited by Zach134 at Jul 5, 2010,
#4
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#5
im sorry dude its sounds like an awesoem song ill have to learn it later but im trying to keep it acousttic seeing as i dont have an overdrive pedal but thanks anyway anyoone know songs that have parts that can go along with this?