Like the description says, I haven't recorded anything in such a long time, I felt the need to do something quickly this morning. It's on my profile, any crits will be returned, thanks for looking.

Oh, and I know there's some timing issues at the start

Last edited by Aléx at Jul 6, 2010,
Not really my thing but well played nonetheless the only real crit i have is with your vocals, and not tonality wise but resonance. Your voice doesnt seem to carry it just kind of stops which at times takes away from the music for me at least. try working on holding notes out and letting your voice ring out because its on the right note and most people i know usually cut short when theyre afraid they cant hold the correct pitch.