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Uh hey guys, first complete song ever. What do you think?

"Puzzle Pieces"

(Verse 1)
Were are we running?
Can you see the end?
Im pacing myself
But i'm weary my friend.

(Pre-Chorus)
The suns climbing higher,
But this race has just begun.
They tell us lifes a journey,
But im finding its not fun...

(Chorus)
They critize... the way we stand.
They tell you that your... not a man.
"Your an adolecent child
And you know nothing of your dreams.
So forget all your ambitions and
Give them all to me.
Tonight will be the night, that we...
Decide your destiny..."

(Verse 2)
The waters kinda cold,
But i suggest you jump right in.
Life will pass you by,
Unless your learning how to swim.

(Pre-Chorus)
The suns climbing higher,
But this race has just begun.
They tell us lifes a journey,
But im finding out its not that fun...

(Chorus)
They critize... the way we stand.
They tell you that... your not a man.
"Your an adolecent teen
And you know nothing of your dreams.
So forget all your ambitions and
Give them all to me.
Tonight will be the night, that we...
Decide your destiny..."

(Outro)
We are all pieces to this puzzle
Our lives all proudly do fit in.
Mines a piece left over.
But im failing with with a grin...
Last edited by dyllpickle94 at Jul 6, 2010,