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crit4crit. thanks for reading.


i thought about
all the letters in your name
and how i don't say them
the way i did
when i meant what i said.

and it felt the same
thinking about eternal sunshine,
forgetting rain and electric trains
working on a spotless mind.
love will tear you apart
but it's only in your brain.

i'm speaking in broken sentences
forming new ones every time
i change my mind.
you have always been worth every drop of rain
i've braved
walking over to your place
but love still doesn't feel
the way i thought it would.

sometimes you get to try again
but only if you stay.
hide me somewhere they can't find me,
hide me in your shame.

and it felt the same,
watching eternal sunshine,
learning how to draw
and forget killing frogs.
close your eyes, joel.
you won't miss much.
close your eyes, joel
she is lost and gone forever
dreadful sorry, clementine

this house is falling down
but love never felt
the way i thought it would
this is the end
so i guess we should just enjoy this.

and it felt the same,
watching eternal sunshine,
learning how to draw
and forget killing frogs.
close your eyes, joel.
you won't miss much.
close your eyes, joel
she is lost and gone forever
dreadful sorry, clementine