#1
So, this is an original song again. Acoustic blues, a bit of a rough mix. Its only got EQ on it right now, and the least amount I could use to get everything to 'fit' in. One mic song. Take a listen in.
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#2
pretty good just turn up the volume for the guitar a bit sometimes it gets lost but good shit overall
#4
The acoustic intro is pretty cool. It reminds me of the song from Borderlands. I'm not a fan of the way you sang this song, but to each his own I guess. The acoustic needs to be brought up a little bit, and the vocals need to come down.

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#6
its cool. Sounds very influenced by jack white. Am I right? I like the guitars. The vocals are ok. You could maybe use a few lessons to refine them and control your tone more.
#7
Yeah, it was pretty much me channelling Jack White. I have taken classes in vocals, and I was the first-seated tenor in my district the only year I tried out. I just completely let go during parts of this song because it was just supposed to be a little story diddy. :P

This one is me with a bit more vocal control:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1334457
#8
Quote by L2112Lif
Yeah, it was pretty much me channelling Jack White. I have taken classes in vocals, and I was the first-seated tenor in my district the only year I tried out. I just completely let go during parts of this song because it was just supposed to be a little story diddy. :P

This one is me with a bit more vocal control:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1334457



AHH!! that one sounds better vocally.
#9
L2112Lif,
Everything about this song reminds me of a cross between Led Zep & Jack White (this is a compliment). Guitar playing is good, though towards the middle the timing wasn't flawless. If it were me (if possible), I would ditch the low pitch/low volume vocal that is near the middle of the song. Singing is good, but it definitely gets pitchy at times (maybe pitch correction could help: I use it once in awhile). I like the slide guitar. It's a good recording overall.
#10
Ya I definitely hear a jack white, led zep influence, which vocal-wise i'm not that fond of, yet its still impressive to me cause i can't get anywhere near that high and that clear. I enjoyed the guitar/riffs a lot, and the slide guitar that comes in near the end should definitely be higher in the mix imo. and vocals lower. I'm not very used to the style of singing so to speak, so I kind of lost track of the songs structure a bit, but like I said I enjoyed the riffs. I think a little more mixing/getting the level right would bring the song out a lot more.
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