#1
Hey, I wrote and recorded this song because I have no social life. It's about a place in the RPG Morrowind so if you have nothing better to do you can just laugh at the lyrics. It's sort of thrash/death/black metal with a touch of loser. Unfortunately my file is from mediafire since I can't get it anywhere else... downloading it takes a few minutes but hopefully it'll be worth it, k thanks!

http://www.mediafire.com/?aaqdy32zfzf

And yes, I do this crit 4 crit business so just drop us a link and i'll comment on your song.

EDIT:

It's now up on my profile.
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#2
Why don't you upload the song to your profile?

You, good sir, have not gone over to your friends house after a hard night of drinking to find 2 dudes passed out in the same room both holding their own flaccid cocks in hand, passed out, with porn on the tv.
#3
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Why don't you upload the song to your profile?


I tried but it keeps spazzing out. I'll give it a little go later though.
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#4
Alright, when you upload it I'll crit you.

You, good sir, have not gone over to your friends house after a hard night of drinking to find 2 dudes passed out in the same room both holding their own flaccid cocks in hand, passed out, with porn on the tv.
#5
The guitars sound pretty muddy, they need to be brought up in the mix. The drums are a little too loud, but if you bring up the guitars it should be alright. The growls aren't the best, but I guess the get the job done. I'm not too big on black metal, but this is alright. I think some keys would sound good with this, thicken it up a bit. Personally, I think the rhythm of the song is a little choppy, it lacks a steady beat. The solo was okay, but it could definitely use some work. I think you played a couple notes out of key.
Overall it's decent, but needs to me mixed better to say the least.

You, good sir, have not gone over to your friends house after a hard night of drinking to find 2 dudes passed out in the same room both holding their own flaccid cocks in hand, passed out, with porn on the tv.
#6
I'm not a huge fan of this style of metal but I'll crit you anyway. The solo isn't too bad, but could be improved. I'm not a fan of the vocals, they seem a little weak to me. The guitar work is pretty good, but not loud enough to be heard too well over the drums. Not a bad tune, but like I said, I'm don't listen to this style of metal often.
#7
mind posting the lyrics?

I'm sure a black metal fan would love this, you got really well that raw quality with the vocals and drums especially, some of your riffs were really good...solo was a little more thrash metal which I liked
like the guy above said, some keys would help alot...

anyway, c4c? technical deathcore, so if you too TRVE just ignore
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=24512818
#9
I'm not the biggest thrash fan but this was cool. The riffs weren't just blasting one chord, the way they run up and down is really cool. Like tacosalad said the solo wasn't melodic or very structured it seemed, but it fit nicely anyway :P It's very cool, so keep making more =D

C4C is in sig.