#1
Almost free vese, but im not creative enough. enjoy. do your worst.

The lonliest tree stands tall
in a sea of tiny flowers
bathing in blissfull insignificance
and longing for his prominence
they bicker in the moving morning air
the breeze from a distant ocean
they sway and float together
while his thick roots hold him down
the lonliest man stands tall
in a sea of huddled masses
bathing in blissfull insignificance
and longing for his prominence
with his wealth and validation
and his paper soul
the people float away from him
while his gold weighs him down.
Last edited by CorpralClegg at Jul 8, 2010,
#2
I think it's great, write more and i'll write music for it
When did harry potter get a signature guitar?

Gear:

Peavey Raptor
Fender Squire Strat
Peavey Audition Trans-tube Amp
Zoom G1 Pedal
Cort M600