This isn't finished yet; all that needs to be written is the outro. What I plan on doing is extending the chorus, with new vocals, and having Guitar II solo over it. I thought it'd be best to let the lead guitarist write his own solo (he's better than me at it anyways).

Anyways, crit what is there, and I'll be sure to return your crit.
Last edited by herby190 at Jul 15, 2010,
The concepts and general sound are all very good for me. On the other hand, I'm not too sure about some of the latter chords in the chord progression, IDK, it just doesn't sound quite right to me, but I'm really picky when it comes to chords and I usually work with really weird chords and I don't think power chords work well with "weird" chords. That said, the progression kinda reminded me of Snow Patrol's Shut Your Eyes, if that's any help.
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Parker Nitefly M
Sumer Metal Driver
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