#1
Haven't posted here in a while, anyway, I made this quick track to show off my new BareNuckle Painkiller, and I've been captivated by it for the past 4 hours. It's such a damn punchy pickup it's awesome. I only used the beginning part of the drum track, so I could make it into an entire song, I've been trying to write something for this drum track for forever it seems.

Idk, what do ya'll think?

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/ethan_hanus/music/all/play864013

C4C as always.
#2
Some grungy vocals would sound great to that in my ears. Pickup sounds sweet too =D The part at 1.45 would make a great chorus with the right voice I think. I mean all this is very simple, but it's great. You should definitely try to make a proper song out of it =D

Thanks for the crit btw =) And no, it's not recorded via the soundboard. Buddy of mine used a zoom h2 or something sitting in the middle of the audience