#1
Im 13 and this is my first song

The End-My Apocolypes

(intro beat)

Verse 1- It's the end of the world and we all saw it coming
The Myan's predicted the end

We didn't make a time machine
or self lacing nike's

I thought we had until twenty fifteen

Chorus- The buildings are falling
The cell phones are calling
To say good bye to your love

The planes are flying
The cars are driving,
but you soon learn theres no where to run

(intro beat)

Verse 2- The boats are all swimming
and we know there is killing

Can-al-bal-izm will rise

we'll be just like zombies
eating ambercombie

and then we will vomit the brains
and then we will vomit the brains
and then we will vomit the brains!

(solo)

Chorus- The buildings are falling
The cell phones are calling
To say good bye to your love

The planes are flying
The cars are driving,
but you soon learn theres no where to run x2

(outro)

if you think it's good tell me if you think I should change something please post.
#2
Save it somewhere and come back to it in a year or 2 and you'll find what needs to be changed.
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#3
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Save it somewhere and come back to it in a year or 2 and you'll find what needs to be changed.

Agreed.

Most of the songs i wrote wen i was young had good concepts but my age restricted me from expressing it properly. Definately come back to it in a year or two
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