#1
Wrote this over the course of a couple of days off of this idea I came up with on the acoustic guitar.

C4C
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#2
-The first 5 bars where meh but when the chords were added in i thought it was a very good groove you had going there.
-The verses arpeggios were very good, i liked that
-The chorus was exceptional!!! like the use of bends
-Post chorus was good nothing really special though
-The solo was a very good change of pace and i liked it
-The outro was just okay, not really eye opening but not bad.

7.5/10 This can be a very strong song if you want it to be, id suggest mixing up the second verse and possibly the outro or add another chorus.

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#3
Thanks man. I critiqued yours.
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#4
i wasn't too impressed with the first few bars, but when it kicked in I really liked it. Those chords were very alterbridge sounding, pretty deep.
The chorus was my favourite part, i think it went greatly with the verses. Really catchy ! My only real problem I think would be the length, it was really short.
If you expanded on it then I'd say 7/10
#5
I liked the intro alot and i think it leads into the chords very well but i don't like the pause between the two it could use something more.

I absolutely loved the chords and verse one, especially the bass groove you had going, it just feels great. I also enjoyed the simplicity of the drums, I cant help but tap my foot every time ill listen.

I really liked verse two and the arpeggios but i think the bass and drums should have changed at least a little bit between the two verses.

You also have a break between the verse and chorus that i disliked, it definitely needs something more in that space.

I felt the chorus was a lot worse than the rest of the song, i liked the actual chords it flows through but the bends sounded harsh, hopefully that is just guitar pro sounding bad but if not i would consider changing it.

I loved the post chorus but i dislike the chord hit at the end of measure 37, i think you should switch the c# to the top of the chord instead of the bottom and have a D on the low E string. Other than that the rest of the chords were great though. Then the section starting at 41 i also disliked, the sixteenth notes just did not fit, i would definitely change that part.

I liked the guitar solo but i felt like it dragged on too long with similar riffs. 49, 50 and 51 all sounded too similar to me and didnt really go anywhere.

The outro was okay but i think you should have some kind of different chord progression for that section, it could have used more.

Overall I loved the song and the feel of it but i felt like it the end kind of fell apart and did not hold up with the quality of the start of the song.

BTW: Thank you for the great critique of my work, it really helped.
#6
Quote by Dwight.Schrute
I liked the intro alot and i think it leads into the chords very well but i don't like the pause between the two it could use something more.

I absolutely loved the chords and verse one, especially the bass groove you had going, it just feels great. I also enjoyed the simplicity of the drums, I cant help but tap my foot every time ill listen.

I really liked verse two and the arpeggios but i think the bass and drums should have changed at least a little bit between the two verses.

You also have a break between the verse and chorus that i disliked, it definitely needs something more in that space.

I felt the chorus was a lot worse than the rest of the song, i liked the actual chords it flows through but the bends sounded harsh, hopefully that is just guitar pro sounding bad but if not i would consider changing it.

I loved the post chorus but i dislike the chord hit at the end of measure 37, i think you should switch the c# to the top of the chord instead of the bottom and have a D on the low E string. Other than that the rest of the chords were great though. Then the section starting at 41 i also disliked, the sixteenth notes just did not fit, i would definitely change that part.

I liked the guitar solo but i felt like it dragged on too long with similar riffs. 49, 50 and 51 all sounded too similar to me and didnt really go anywhere.

The outro was okay but i think you should have some kind of different chord progression for that section, it could have used more.

Overall I loved the song and the feel of it but i felt like it the end kind of fell apart and did not hold up with the quality of the start of the song.

BTW: Thank you for the great critique of my work, it really helped.


Thanks for the great critique man. I'm gonna take what you said and use it in my song.
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