#2
The song doesn't really progress much does it?

Chords don't really change much, rhythm doesn't really change much..

Everything is too consistant for me to like it if i'm honest
#4
It does kind of sound like a KISS song haha, but it is a good start. I would add more variation into the verses, and maybe shorten the pre chorus and the chorus. Maybe that would give you some space to put in a guitar solo or something.

It is pretty nice to see a song like this though, instead of all that crappy generic whatever-core thats always on here. :P
#5
pretty catchy riffs, but not progressive song for sure.

drums sound like from 80's rock bands =D
smile
#6
It's an ok generic rock song, needs more variation though. You could achieve this by adding lead lines and more interesting drums/bass (don't get me wrong, the beat is solid), I also feel the song needs a solo