#2
jp,
I can't hear the guitar super clearly much of the time, but your playing seems very good to me. Hard to tell for sure, but my only gripe about the playing is that perhaps the timing wasn't 100% flawless during the entire song, but that could be a false impression from the video. You didn't ask for a review of anything else.........so if you could review my music at this link please:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1332089
#4
This song is very generic.

You, good sir, have not gone over to your friends house after a hard night of drinking to find 2 dudes passed out in the same room both holding their own flaccid cocks in hand, passed out, with porn on the tv.