#1
Hey everyone, this is one of my newest efforts, a post-hardcore (really putting emphasis on the hardcore part)

It reminds me of something Oceana would do, tell me what you think. C4C
Attachments:
Aeromancy.mid
Aeromancy.gp4
Poop.


Yes, poop.
#3
Wow, that was awesome. It was really catchy in a very cool way. I didn't much like the breakdowns but I'm not much of a break down kind of guy.

****in sweet.
i don't know why i feel so dry
#4
Quote by slayerfrk
do you mean oceano?



Oceano is a deathcore band.

Oceana is a post-esque band, so no.
Poop.


Yes, poop.
#5
Love the intro, upbeat and great, good use of time signatures. Breakdowns feel misplaced in my ears. in bar 44 Guitar II does some sort of mini-solo, which sounds out of place too. Love the mixture of dissonance and harmony throughout the song. The melodic passages are great, breakdowns need improvement.

Overall you have a great song, my only real complaint would be that the breakdowns aren't great. Structure too could be improved. Although over all good job.

Be sure to check out my post-hardcore song "Lost in an Art of Suffering" and leave a small crit