#2
The backing track sounds fine, but the lead guitar part seems to sloppily wander around. There is some actual phrasing, but it is hidden by the messiness and the rhythmic errors.
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#3
Thanks for the feedback. "sloppily wandering around" describes it pretty well. XD I want to get back to a theme but then it just sounds repetitive.
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#4
It's not too bad, just a little messy, it starts off badly and gets better. I think you just need to slow down a bit more and feel the song and not worry about chucking in some slightly more complicated stuff. You can do all that later, a good way I teach improvisng is to give the pupil only 3 notes and tell them to do what they can with them, all over the fretboard obviously!

I quite like the tone though, maybe bring the lead guitar down a tad.