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Late on monday night when i was playing my guitar, a few lines of lyrics popped into my head that fitted what i was playing. So i wrote the first verse, then the 2nd and 3rd yesterday and this morning. It's the first time i've really tried writing anything seriously. Yeah there's probably some old cliches or stolen lines from other songs and i know there isnt really a chorus, but i'd like any feedback at all. Thanks!


Remember

I remember not that long ago
When I used to live just down the road
I'd look out the window and i'd see you go by
Never once with a tear in your eye

But now when i look at you
You don't walk the same like you used to do
You don't bring the sun like you used to bring
You don't sing the songs that you used to sing

I really wouldn't have known you
Save the fact that yours eyes are blue

I remember not that long ago
You told me you could save my soul
Carry it across the see
Unchain me and set me free

But when i put my trust in you
You lied the same like you used to do
You don't have the faith that you used to have
You don't give a **** when you gave a damn

I really wouldn't have known you
Save the fact that you cant tell the truth

I remember not that long ago
You told me you were feeling old
Started talking all about the past
Didn't know how long you'd last

But when i came and stood by you
You died the same like you used to do
You didn't wait for me like you used to wait
You didn't take the time like you used to take
Split your lungs with blood and thunder
When you see the white whale
Break your backs and crack your oars men
If you wish to prevail