#1
This is the title track of a concept album I'm starting to work on. Its not completely finished, but it is for the most part. PLEASE LEAVE ANY CRITICISM IN A COMMENT


A Walk through Shattered Skies


Winter falls in its graceful snow,
My heart and spirit no longer glow.
The chill of the air freezes me still,
My saving grace is my withered will.

Life isn’t what it used to be,
It’s now a fearsome reckless sea.
Life’s tides have turned and so have I,
As I begin to walk this shattered sky.

The scene is chilling,
The scene is bleak,
To restore my spirit,
Is all I seek.
The winds of change continue to blow,
And with them bringing the question why?
My answers to these questions,
Have forever been lies,
But forever this life remains,
A walk through shattered skies.

Struggling to break free from him,
My spirit’s likelihood looks grim.
Then like a voice from above me,
She speaks her words of recovery.

Though all my struggles and wars,
I’ve never longed for anything more,
Than a voice of reason to guide me.
That voice is now handed to me free.

The scene is chilling,
The scene is bleak,
To restore my spirit,
Is all I seek.
The winds of change continue to blow,
And with them bringing the question why?
My answers to these questions,
Are beginning to be revised
But for now this life remains,
A walk through shattered skies.


His grip is now loosening,
Blood starts to flow.
The control has been taken,
My spirit regains its glow.

“You are not my master!
I control you!
Be gone you withered corpse!
I’ll begin life anew.”

The scene is thrilling,
His power is meek,
My spirits been restored,
And the grip is now weak.
The winds of change continue to blow,
And with them bringing peace of mind.
Winter is cloud gone long ago,
Gone with it the depression and lies,
So my life no longer remains,
A walk through shattered skies.
My Solo Concept album Lyrics:
Void
Last edited by RockynBull at Jul 14, 2010,
#2
I really liked the first two stanza's. I feel like it completely fell apart after that.