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I've written a few songs and I'd just like to know what you guys think of the lyrics.

How'd You Ever:
We are perfect, ly ****ed up
I love you, Not quite enough
I have never felt the same, about anyone
I have never felt the same, Inside anyone

How'd you ever, Wind up next to me
I was never, on your mind
You would never, Wait for me
I would never ever ask a second time

You, Gave up your first time
You talk yourself, Into being mine
you're all talk, I'm here to help you walk
There's no way to put this nice you look so good under ice.

How'd you ever, wind up next to me
I was never on your mind
You would never, Wait for me
I would never ever ask a second time

These words will never reach your ears
There is hope for us, I fear
I know its hard to say, just how I feel
I want you, to know just one word
I feel to strong to leave the credit to love
That was the word.

How'd you ever wind up next to me
I was never, on your mind
You would never ever wait for me
I would never ever ask a second time.
"Whats that noise??"

"... Jazz"