#1
This is an intro I wrote a while back. I thought it was pretty good but haven't been able to add anything else (major block). So, crit, advice and suggestions welcome. C4C if you post a link.

The genre is alternative rock, but I sometimes incorporate metal riffery (such as here) and I have never ventured below Drop D before.
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Last edited by Emperor's Child at Jul 15, 2010,
#2
It's a decent intro, but the song really depends on where you take it.

Just a thought; maybe it would add if on every other time through the riff, you had the guitars harmonize, like I did in the link below.

Also, for C4C, anything from my sig; I'd actually prefer one of the incomplete ones, because neither of them have been reviewed yet.
Attachments:
Berserker.gp5
Berserker.gp4
Last edited by herby190 at Jul 15, 2010,
#3
Ha, My Guitar Pro's "import" doesn't always work and it seems yours is no exception. I'd appreciate a MIDI or GP4 (They always work).

I'll C4C now anyway

EDIT: Ok so I can't open your other files either
Guitars & Gear:
Parker Nitefly M
Sumer Metal Driver
Ibanez RGD2120Z
AMT SS-11B
Two Notes Torpedo CAB
Last edited by Emperor's Child at Jul 15, 2010,
#4
Idk if that's my bad, or yours; my Guitar Pro has been acting up lately.

Anyways, I added GP4s to both of the incomplete ones.

Edit: Oh, I see what you mean; I added it above.
Last edited by herby190 at Jul 15, 2010,
#5
Cheers

EDIT: Well I definitely liked the first harmony, not too sure about the second but I don't even know what the next part of the song will be like. Also, the RSE you used and the harmonics seem different to what I originally wrote. Maybe I uploaded an old version of the intro.
Guitars & Gear:
Parker Nitefly M
Sumer Metal Driver
Ibanez RGD2120Z
AMT SS-11B
Two Notes Torpedo CAB
Last edited by Emperor's Child at Jul 15, 2010,
#6
Good intro. Tempo is just right to get a good groove. Keep working on this. Would really like to see where you take this.

btw, thanks for the crit.
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#7
Ha, I would like to know where to take this!!! Glad you like it though.
Guitars & Gear:
Parker Nitefly M
Sumer Metal Driver
Ibanez RGD2120Z
AMT SS-11B
Two Notes Torpedo CAB