#1
I just finished up a sequel to one of my songs. It's on my profile. I recorded it differently than I usually do. Instead of recording the song all the way through all at once, I recorded each section separately, then mixed them all together. I'd like to know what you guys think of the composition, and the mixing. All feedback is appreciated. Thanks for looking! C4C of course!

EDIT: I know the drums are a little too loud. I'm currently uploading the new mix to my YouTube channel, so it should be up shortly.

You, good sir, have not gone over to your friends house after a hard night of drinking to find 2 dudes passed out in the same room both holding their own flaccid cocks in hand, passed out, with porn on the tv.
Last edited by RisingForce1990 at Jul 16, 2010,
#2
Bump.

You, good sir, have not gone over to your friends house after a hard night of drinking to find 2 dudes passed out in the same room both holding their own flaccid cocks in hand, passed out, with porn on the tv.
#3
Hey man, good song I liked it, very cool! The only thing is your guitar has to be way louder man (I know you probably know this already). The drums are overpowering everything. If the guitar was louder it would also make the drums sound less fake, so don't lower the drums higher the guitar and your good to go!
#4
Thanks man. I'll raise up the volume on the guitars.

You, good sir, have not gone over to your friends house after a hard night of drinking to find 2 dudes passed out in the same room both holding their own flaccid cocks in hand, passed out, with porn on the tv.
#5
Guitar work is good, you've got some cool stuff going on but you can easily make it even more interesting. Transitions could be smoother. I don't like the way you used the china, it doesn't go hand in hand with the hi-hat and it really cuts through the mix and sets the listener out a bit.

Mixing was not that good. Sounds like the rhythm guitar is not double tracked or paned each way, left and right. It's sounds like it's mono and it's really muddy. The drums aren't too loud, the guitars are too low. Cut down on the bass and boost the highs a bit so it sticks more out in the mix and makes it less muddy.

The composition itself (except for some of the drumming) is quite good and has a lot of potential! Keep it up! (:

Btw bumping is not allowed.
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#7
Alright, I turned up the guitars in the mix. I just hope it's not clipping. The new mix is on my profile.

You, good sir, have not gone over to your friends house after a hard night of drinking to find 2 dudes passed out in the same room both holding their own flaccid cocks in hand, passed out, with porn on the tv.