it's under my recordings as "untitled"

it's not even a full song, just the ending climax.
I haven't fully written the song out yet so I just recorded the ending, but I just wanted some opinions.
It's definitely not the best quality, but you can get the gist of it.
I was in a rush and kept messing up the timing, haha, but yeah.
Any advice on improving it would be greatly appreciated.

I picked up little parts of it and it sounds cool. If you have the time and equipment, you should definitely re-record it.. The timing seems to be all over the place at parts so try using a metronome. Work more on the mix itself, too. The leads seem to be drowning in the the rhythm playing so give those some more presence. Keep working on it! It definitely has potential.

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