#2
Your music is not bad but also not great. Really middle of the road. Its listenable but I've heard it a thousand times before. Stop trying so hard to be original and smash genres together and just write music the that you want to hear.

You also need a name that doesn't openly rip off other band names. I know Academies and Drives are cool things to name your band after these days, but you guys have some potential, so get a name that will grab someone's attention. I wish I had some suggestions for you, but my attention has been grabbed by something far more interesting, like "Gut-Wrenched Putrescense" or something of that sort, and thus my brain isn't working.