#1
It's in my profile, if you wouldn't mind doing some critiquing. I'll critique yours if you do mine
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#2
Well. It's shittyly recorded. The song itself seems to be rhythm oriented so I'm suggesting that you have lyrics written or something but can't sing yerself. If ye manages to properly record it, it would rock.
#3
Quote by Zeletros
Well. It's shittyly recorded. The song itself seems to be rhythm oriented so I'm suggesting that you have lyrics written or something but can't sing yerself. If ye manages to properly record it, it would rock.


Thanks man, and yeah there are lyrics. I thought I posted them.
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