#1
If anyone could check the English please

What's left for me
When all my life revolves about regrets
And every thought is a rod piercing my heart

Of the dreams I once had only ruins remain
Every decision I made was a mistake
So,tell me now: What's left for me?

How am I
How am I supposed to give love
When I can't even accept myself
I'm alone in this
Struggling and trying to cut the wires of my brain
That wind around broken memories
This is a war I cannot win
I'm alone in this
This is a war I cannot win
A war that strains every cell of my body
And I'm in this alone
#2
When all my life revolves about regrets... I would change to When all my life revolves around regrets...makes the stanza flow better.

my favorite part is this...

How am I
How am I supposed to give love
When I can't even accept myself
I'm alone in this......................................try to eliminate this part its actually not necessary
Struggling and trying to cut the wires of my brain
That wind around broken memories

the last two lines of the above I liked the most...its def short not sure if you meant it to be but if it isnt keep at it either way
#3
Thank you!
Yup,it's supposed to be that short,we recorded the song on Monday and we eleminated a few parts.
Thank you for the ideas