#2
I think the music itself is pretty good, but the production is quite crude. The overall sound is quite thin and the guitar playing is sort of sloppy at times. Also, the vocals sound somewhat detached. Anyway, there's some good stuff here, keep working on it, and focus on the production next time you record.
Gear:

Guitars: Ibanez SV5470F, Ibanez Xpt700, Fender MIM Standard Stratocaster ('04-'05), Jackson Ps-2
Ashton AG200,
Amps: ENGL E530, Bugera 6262-212,
FX: TC Electronics G-major 2, Behringer EQ700, Morley Volume / Wah
#3
It's true, the production could be better, especially the sound of the drums.

But you've got some nice modern metal going on there! Fiction reminds me of Bullet for my Valentine and not thrash at all. "So Far From Perfection" is also really good!

All in all, i'd definitely buy your EP guys, you did a great job for a debut album!