#1
need some input on these songs before i start recording them hehe, the extra thing i put there is just for kicks.
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Last edited by Freak44 at Jul 20, 2010,
#2
Critting extra unno:

The intro is kind of redundant imo. The chord progression should have varied some during the second time, would have made it much better.

Once the verse started it was all good though. No real complaints from me here. I do think you could have done something with the lead guitar to make it more interesting, but honestly it's fine as it is. Same with the bass, it could have used a cool bass line once or twice but it doesn't sound out of place or anything as is. The solo maybe could slowed down and used some bent notes but that's really a personal preference, for the genre it should get by just fine.

Overall about 7/10. Nothing really wrong with it, but it could be a bit more interesting.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1340260