#4
Great recording, and very solid mix! I loved the melody. In my mind the strongest part of the song was around 1:20 and the small breakdown afterwards — it's when I could hear the vocals best and everything seemed to really take flight. I would like to hear juuuust a smidge more of your main vox without the (what I think is) falsetto over it. But I quite enjoyed that, excellent work. Especially for a 17-year old kid. Did you compose and record all by yourself?

also, check mine out if you have time!

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1340760
#5
Quote by jables23092
Great recording, and very solid mix! I loved the melody. In my mind the strongest part of the song was around 1:20 and the small breakdown afterwards — it's when I could hear the vocals best and everything seemed to really take flight. I would like to hear juuuust a smidge more of your main vox without the (what I think is) falsetto over it. But I quite enjoyed that, excellent work. Especially for a 17-year old kid. Did you compose and record all by yourself?

also, check mine out if you have time!

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1340760


Thanks. I agree with you on the verse vocals, I was going to do that, but figured I'd just leave it and maybe change it another time. And yes, everything was done by me.

I'll give yours a listen!
#6
I'm listening in Cans so can't comment too much on the mix but it sounds radio ready to me, you should be getting it out there!

Really love the vibe it has almost a bit psychadelic.

I think your voice could come forward a tad aswell,

great job mate