After some right hand training I've decided to record a video of this Oasis song, I've also tuned the guitar , please compare with the other video and see if there was some progress

C4C as always

link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-rzFKP38O5k
Never actually heard the song but from what I see you could use some work man. I'd say first off, practice your strumming patterns, keep your arm swinging even when there are rests within the pattern. You must always keep the rhythm going as to keep some sense of timing. Vocals were a bit off, I don't know how long you've been singing and playing for but if it's not for a long time then you know...it wasn't too shabby man. If not, well then start practicing and you'll see improvements in no time!