#1
Hey this my band Rath first song Shadow of Death tell me if you like it i want some feedback. Also tell me if you like my band or song name I'm trying to think of a new band name but i think the song name is good. also lol im really new to melodic death metal but i really like it so im just taking a shot at the genre.

Here is the Link:
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Mr_Wizard/music/all/play870594
Gear List:
Gibson Les Paul Studio Cherry Faded
Bugera 6262 2x12
Boss SD-1
Boss GE-7
Boss NS-2
Morley Power Wah
Last edited by Mr_Wizard at Jul 21, 2010,
#3
The first Shadow of Death was pretty good but the lead part of the second one was kind of sketchy, mainly the choppiness and the bends weren't quite in tune. But both of those problems can easily be fixed with practice.
#4
lol thats cause im playing with a broke left arm

and i fixed the link
Gear List:
Gibson Les Paul Studio Cherry Faded
Bugera 6262 2x12
Boss SD-1
Boss GE-7
Boss NS-2
Morley Power Wah
Last edited by Mr_Wizard at Jul 21, 2010,
#6
besides the sloppy playing atm its pretty good right? and also need to add drums bass and lyrics and im thinkin bout gettin a keyboard player
Gear List:
Gibson Les Paul Studio Cherry Faded
Bugera 6262 2x12
Boss SD-1
Boss GE-7
Boss NS-2
Morley Power Wah
#7
Yeah its pretty good, except in Shadow of Death 2, I wouldn't have kept the same progression going for that long. I would have went through that progression about twice and then go into another riff. and it'll sound a lot better with the rest of the band.
#8
k thanks
Gear List:
Gibson Les Paul Studio Cherry Faded
Bugera 6262 2x12
Boss SD-1
Boss GE-7
Boss NS-2
Morley Power Wah
#9
It's more on the melodic side than death.

Thought it was cool though, at least it sounded real.
Gear: Lindo victory flying V, Orange 30w practice amp, Jazz iii guitar picks, mobile phone apps for tuner and metronome.
#10
Not bad at all. I like the riffs and the lead, just needs cleaned up and some better recording quality would be nice, although I'm guessing you don't have the means to make a better recording atm or it would probably be up here. Keep at it!

You, good sir, have not gone over to your friends house after a hard night of drinking to find 2 dudes passed out in the same room both holding their own flaccid cocks in hand, passed out, with porn on the tv.