#1
The title isn't what the song name is.
THe song name is to be determined.
If anyone wants to help with that...

So, I got inspired to write this son, and another song while listening to Dethklok.
Briefcase full of Guts to be exact.

Here goes:
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Rot,
Flesh,
Fallen from what used to be
A sympathy of our lives
Come to devastate us all
People Dying
Human race… Gone!

--First Solo (Chandler)—

Awaken from the grave
Terrorize our souls
Death Shall not be avenged…

--Solo (Tyrone)—

Zombies! Zombies!
Ripping at my brains
Zombies! Zombies!
Eating my testicles
Zombies! Zombies!
They’re out to get me!
Aaaaaauuuuuggggghhhhh

--Solo(Chandler, then Tyrone)—

As we wait for Z-day
Death will be ceased
By a Zombie horde, No longer shall we thrive!
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The song will have a Dethklok vocal style to it.
And... Since the rules state 1 song per thread, and no posting more than 1 threads per day...
Next song will be up in a while.

Critique for critique anyone?
..I was watching my death.
#2
i like it!
one thing the testicles line
i would change it but other than that i want oto hear that when its done
#3
Quote by supersac
i like it!
one thing the testicles line
i would change it but other than that i want oto hear that when its done


I put the "Eating my testicles" line as a... How to explain it?
When someone listens to the song, they don't fully understand it.
Then, They go to read the lyrics...
And they say...
What The ****!
Yeah.
Hope that explains my reasoning behind that line.
..I was watching my death.