#1
Yes I'm back with another viking metal song. Feel the fury of metal -

Through these dark days of mine
There was only one light to shine
Ignite the fire on my command
Tall and proud is how we stand

I clutch my sword till the bitter end
Daylight breaks and we defend
Seven headed beasts guard the gate
We are warriors of fate!

Through sickness pain and strife
Heavy metal is our life
relinquish control
Feel the metal in your soul

Odin shall take our souls when we die
I hold my holy blade up to the sky
At the end we sit on the shelf of the slain
And in Valhalla I'll see you all again

Through sickness pain and strife
Heavy metal is our life
relinquish control
Feel the metal in your soul
Raise your chalice my brother
Raise it high
To catch the fire that falls from the sky
#2
you're concentrating too much on making things rhyme. if this song is from your blackened viking metal heart. just get your pen and start writing. don't try and structure a song. just, write...
#3
So vikings listened to Metal back in the days, and that's what they sang about in the folk songs eh?
#5
I accept that as a compliment of the highest order.
Raise your chalice my brother
Raise it high
To catch the fire that falls from the sky