This sounds great! You played the guitar part perfectly, and you kinda look like him too haha. Overall, I acutally liked your playing better cus you have a better vibrato. I didn't really like the flanger in the beginning too much though, but I guess it fits.

Check out my cover of Hystera: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1342541
Really liked it :-)

I've just posted up a cover of it too (albeit a slightly different version...), let me know what you think http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OLHR1W98TiA
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