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Opinions, criticism, and advice please on these lyrics would be greatly appreciated.


Faith unbroken, unlike the chains of slaves
The trust that we share continues on
Tears roll down without consequence
All of this arguing passes us by

The moon falls down
As the night comes to an end

Happiness is taken for granted
But we’re neither destroyed nor reckless
We are careful in our decisions
Yet the ones around us still hurt

But the moon still falls down
As the night comes to an end
And we still lay our heads
So we can just dream

We will not be forgotten
This will always be a memory
Of what has happened
And what will happen

Because the moon falls down
As the night comes to an end
And we lay our heads
So we can dream