#1
Not sure if that title explains it right but I dont really care =D

I was working on a song (prog metal, I guess) and decided that an acoustic break would fit it nicely. I came up with something and was wanting to know if you all think it sounds good.

Instead of making you listen to the whole song (which needs a LOT of work), I transfered the part I'm wanting criticism on into a new file.
Attachments:
acousticseg.gp5
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Last edited by deathbycontrol at Jul 24, 2010,
#2
That was pretty cool.
The chord progression was pretty simple, it works but if you're aiming for Prog. Metal I would suggest keeping the same progression but just spice it up.
The Drums and Bass were good, but a drum fill at bar 4 would give a better transition, also, I'd suggest you change the bass to "Fingered Bass" atleast for the acoustic part, sounds much better :P
Then the melody was excellent, nothing bad to say about it, it reminded me of In Flames.
#3
Thanks, and when you say spice it up, how exactly? And I'll do that about the drums and bass.

My cousin said it sounded like In Flames, too lol.
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Here have a waffle!
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