Hey, thanks for the crit. I was actually thinking of critting this two days ago, but I went to bed instead. :p

Great intro, like the synth leads and layering.

Approaching the Fishdog is also very good, but I don't really like Fishdog.

I like the major/happy parts

The breakdown is also pretty cool.

Riff riff riff; I think it a bit boring and generic.

I think you gave it a pretty epic and honorable ending too. It reminds me of BTBAM's Selkies: The endless obsession-outro.