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Heya, first time posting here; this is a bluesy song I wrote a while back. Criticism welcome.

Hey, little baby I never knew
Hey, little babe I'll be seeing you

Baby, I wish I'd know
Why you were taken so long ago

Dear old Mama had the blues
She still got your tiny shoes

Hey, little baby I never knew
Hey, little babe I'll be seeing you

Baby, I know we'll meet
When I rest my weary feet

Hey, little baby I never knew
Hey, little babe I'll be seeing you