#1
Brighter than the sun this days been brought birth
tied down to the ocean, bliss tied in warmth
hours after hours split through the page
hesitate to hesitate a description of this state
solidify the silence, and drop the lure that I'll take
love's just a pole and your hanging on like dead bait.

Drag me behind the anchors when you leave out to sea
paint me and abstract painting of who you'd like to be
drag me behind the anchor
drag me out to see
drag me behind the anchor
I'm drowning let me be.

sleep keeps screaming to me
pulling me in like the pools of your eyes
the mind begins to wander
wander off into sub euphoric consciousness
in this dream world drowning, jaw dropped paralyzed.
Quote by herby190
When I saw that, I thought of musical notes.... my elementary school teachers taught them as "tee-tees" "ta-tas" and a bunch of other nonsense....
#2
Once again, although I don't know if I've said this, I love your writing.
Every single word you use falls into place as if it was meant to be there. I'm not jealous at all
But seriously, you have a way with words.
#3
Quote by Pyrest
Once again, although I don't know if I've said this, I love your writing.
Every single word you use falls into place as if it was meant to be there. I'm not jealous at all
But seriously, you have a way with words.


thank you, very much from the bottom of my heart. Do you have anything in particular you would like me to crit of yours?
Quote by herby190
When I saw that, I thought of musical notes.... my elementary school teachers taught them as "tee-tees" "ta-tas" and a bunch of other nonsense....