#1
i wanna ask a favor of you guys.

i have a song i've written for a pop-punk band im in, it's all done.

except the lyrics.

I'll record with vocaroo, and let see who can make the best lyrics.
http://vocaroo.com/?media=vy3EiYxsjDeGhWLUo
please help, i can't lyrics for shit.

i'll give you a credit in the song if its a go.
#2
Damn, I'm horrible at this. I'll give it a few more listens tomorrow and see if anything hits me.
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#3
Quote by Seither2k
Damn, I'm horrible at this. I'll give it a few more listens tomorrow and see if anything hits me.

thanks bro.
#6
Quote by cheesecakes4
Make your own lyrics, you'll just never get happy with the ones we write anyway..

but, i'd love it if someone could help me.

maybe like give me a running start you know?
#7
cant wait for the bell to ring.then im outa this damn shcool.-i dont know maybe a topic for u.
#8
Instanly when i heard the riff i was inspired to write you words. and if u got some i dont care cause ill use these words. so if u still need give me a day and you got a song
#10
Coasting over these seaside memories
I got lost among your melodies
Put me to sleep under these trees
With you in my arms and the stars in my sight

We felt love in our youthful innocence
Maybe we can take a stand in what we represent
These days that made it all worth living
Those smiles that made it feel like we were giving
It our all, for the dreams we saw

ummm, if you like this I could write out the rest
#11
Quote by GuyFwkes
Coasting over these seaside memories
I got lost among your melodies
Put me to sleep under these trees
With you in my arms and the stars in my sight

We felt love in our youthful innocence
Maybe we can take a stand in what we represent
These days that made it all worth living
Those smiles that made it feel like we were giving
It our all, for the dreams we saw

ummm, if you like this I could write out the rest


yeah write out the rest, and then let me figure out how you would sing it.
#12
Coasting over these seaside memories
I got lost among your melodies
Put me to sleep under these trees
With you in my arms and the stars in my sight

We felt love in our youthful innocence
Maybe we can take a stand in what we represent
These days that made it all worth living
Those smiles that made it feel like we were giving
It our all, for the dreams we saw

I wish i could bury my heart in the sand here
That way I could, stay all year
Keep my memory's in mint condition
While we play the ocean's rendition
Of me missing you

You came in, and I gave way
This all left me to get swept away
Now Im stranded in the memories of you
Now Im hurt by every ocean view

Your in my mind in time
we won't learn to forget about
Like this crystal clear water
You've made me doubt

I wish i could bury my heart in the sand here
That way I could stay all year
Keep my memory's in mint condition
While we play the ocean's rendition
Of me missing you

I wish i could bury my heart in the sand here
That way I could, stay all year
Keep my memory's in mint condition
While we play the ocean's rendition
Of me missing you

Of me missing you

-End of Song-

I know its very cheesy, but at worst it gives you something to work with
#13
Quote by GuyFwkes
Coasting over these seaside memories
I got lost among your melodies
Put me to sleep under these trees
With you in my arms and the stars in my sight

We felt love in our youthful innocence
Maybe we can take a stand in what we represent
These days that made it all worth living
Those smiles that made it feel like we were giving
It our all, for the dreams we saw

I wish i could bury my heart in the sand here
That way I could, stay all year
Keep my memory's in mint condition
While we play the ocean's rendition
Of me missing you

You came in, and I gave way
This all left me to get swept away
Now Im stranded in the memories of you
Now Im hurt by every ocean view

Your in my mind in time
we won't learn to forget about
Like this crystal clear water
You've made me doubt

I wish i could bury my heart in the sand here
That way I could stay all year
Keep my memory's in mint condition
While we play the ocean's rendition
Of me missing you

I wish i could bury my heart in the sand here
That way I could, stay all year
Keep my memory's in mint condition
While we play the ocean's rendition
Of me missing you

Of me missing you

-End of Song-

I know its very cheesy, but at worst it gives you something to work with



Wow . . . I don't know about Alice, but i think its awesome !!! a bit of cheese can be good if you use it well.
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