#1
Lyrics for a yet new song. It's a work in progress. I don't think it's my best. But thought I would churn it out, see what Ultimate-Guitar thinks.

Nightfall produces apathy
skies are burning red
It comes to attack me
See the eyes of the dead

Your a dying breed
bounded by a creed
The hate that's in your life
Can't be cut out with a knife

Moonlight skies ablaze
Time is standing still
These promises betrayed
Thou shall do what thy wilt


Your a dying breed
bounded by a creed
The hate that's in your life
Can't be cut out with a knife

What do we think?

I thought I'd churn them out, get a response and it's still a work in progress.
Bass Gear:

Mensinger: Speesy
Fender Precision 1989 (CIJ Rosewood)
Fender Steve Harris (CIJ)
Lakland J Sonic 5
Epiphone Explorer
Maruszczyk (custom) Jake

Ashdown CTM 100