#1
I wrote this song about a year ago.

"The soldier in my mind is dying"
His one and only love was crying
she'll love more than one, there's no denying
So please, stop your lying
Please stop lying

When a candle burns out, a heart breaks
You don't understand, that's all it takes
Please find a room for laying
There's no reason, to call it betraying
And although, she may find freedom
It's not too hard for one to reason,
so just reason
Another season, you're still dumb
Have you ever, ever had any fun?

Go find a religion for praying
There's no more time any more of your hating
And if you can't find one, find another woman
Although she can't provide you good children
Even though, no good children
#2
"It's not too hard for one to reason,
so just reason
Another season, you're still dumb
Have you ever, ever had any fun?" I love this line.. "you're still dumb" is so abrupt, it's surprising, and i like that i didnt expect something like that...

Overall, i really like it... Especially the title, i think the title is just really clever.. Good job.