#1
c4c, whatever.

the house is all quiet and she's still not home
i'm crawling wondering why i ****ed her, ethan frome
was a good book but i didn't understand the end,
i've been kept away from my phone, my thoughts
wander to you as you arrive home and i taste the
scent of your wet hair that drifts across my cheeks
and in the attic where all the dust lies contains my
heart where that little boy grew up to be someone
who would tell their own little boy 'son i am your father,
i will whip you till you ****ing scream' but now i
enter the attic and everything is undisturbed
kept in their shiny packaging,
those baseball cards (I hate baseball)
that trophy collection
and my toys
I bring them out because I've just watched toy story 3
and **** that shit was emotional
while I leave I think about you and how you rode on my
toy scooter, now here I am wishing I could just
****
you
in
the
ass.
#2
MAN haven't we all felt like this before, haven't we all lost a little bit of our childhood through some misdemeanor **** Man, the part about toy story three is so real, it felt like yesterday when i last saw that movie. a timeless classic. you encapsulated the real emotions of life and **** me i am in tears. i should buy YOU a trophy. i really hope that girl doesn't have some kind of std because that would majorly suck. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS, i am in tears as i am writing this, this **** is really heartfelt, damn! you are my new favorite writer and this is among the best i have ever read. GAWDDAMIT!

EDIT: You did have a pack of condoms with you RIIIGGGHHHHHTTTTTTTT?
Last edited by Bleed Away at Jul 26, 2010,
#3
Quote by Hendrix_fan_14
c4c, whatever.

the house is all quiet and she's still not home
i'm crawling wondering why i ****ed her, ethan frome
was a good book but i didn't understand the end,

wowza this is byoootiful. I've never read such gorgeous lines be4... I liek how home and from rhymed and the inner assonance of 'good' and 'book'. I didn't understand it either but it was sooo good ololololllol11!!!eleven!!

i've been kept away from my phone, my thoughts
wander to you as you arrive home and i taste the
scent of your wet hair that drifts across my cheeks

Oh man this makes my heart aaaache like in 7th grade. oh, and the long o in home and phone - did you do that on PURPOSE? GEEZ, MAN, YOUR'E A GENYUSS.


and in the attic where all the dust lies contains my
heart where that little boy grew up to be someone
who would tell their own little boy 'son i am your father,
i will whip you till you ****ing scream' but now i

OH NO HE DIDENT JUST DO THAT.

enter the attic and everything is undisturbed
kept in their shiny packaging,
those baseball cards (I hate baseball)

i know riet... stupid people liking baseball.

that trophy collection
and my toys
I bring them out because I've just watched toy story 3

that movie was so freeeekinnn' good, man. it was liek my childhood except rait now.

and **** that shit was emotional

oh yeessssss. I haven't cryed like that in a long time.

while I leave I think about you and how you rode on my
toy scooter, now here I am wishing I could just
****
you
in
the
ass.

I concur, my friend, I concur.




I wood do c4c to you but i'd never right anything this good and it wud be embrassing. but I liek yours!!!!1!11olol!
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That's a shamanic incantation of truth if I ever heard one.
#5
Me, too, it just makes me want to scream, "SPLIT YOUR LUNGS WITH BLOOD AND THUNDERRRRR/WHEN YOO SEE TEH WHITE WHAAAAAAILE." ololol that would be a perfec theme song for toy story 4 when the kid is forty and still living in his mum's basement. ololol
#6
thanks so much guys, i really wanted to stress that 'i'm ****ing drunk man walking down the street, toy story 3' thing in this piece so i'm glad you hoes dug that.

and never let anyone get you down, drop a few slabs and you'll be alright.