#1
I've wrote these two songs and recorded them with my band, as they're our first original songs we want to you tell what you think, please don't push too hard we're beginners
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Last edited by Desmond-hume at Jul 26, 2010,
#2
tune the guitar.
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#3
ok, my first advice would be tune ur guitar properly specially in the beloved song. its so out of tune. its great that ur starting to write ur own songs. i dont know how long uve been playing or anything so i dont have any idea what u already know.,..but, try changing strumming pattern, practice more singing and playing at the same time. and use some pauses or chord shifts to difference a verse for a chorus, for a bridge, etc....and above all practice!
cheers dude!
i like britpop XD

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I voted "evolutionism", though. Cuz you know... it's sciencey.



Originally Posted by anonymus
We were all created by God...
As Monkeys...
Then evolved.
End Debate.
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