#1
Hi,

I composed this a few days ago and used the free equipment I could get on internet (so, it´s crap) and then a little mixing table to make the sound go through before hitting the computer.

Oh, and I used Line 6 Floor Pod.

It's not top quality, so please look away from that buzzing and all that and just focus on the sound/harmony/melody whatever, and tell me what you really think - and I know when people or joking or "just being nice" so feel free to express yourself as much as you like.

Consider I've been playing for 2 years with no teachers at all.

http://www.myspace.com/timmagnussenandfriends
#3
The song itself sounds okay, but things seem a little bit messy to me, with the lead guitar not cutting through the mix very well. And like said before, vocals would help alot, and so would bass.

Hopefully you will find this helpfull =)

Bas.
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#4
I wanted to add bass but I will probably wait till I have more money and buy some better recording devices because it just sounds awful.

The solo es hardly "pressed" into the song as I would say it, but then again it´s the recording device.

I like it to be instrumental because I know none who can sing as I like it.
#5
it does need some vocals, even a crap vocal just distorted would add a lot to the song, other than that yeah it's good guitar playing, okay production i think but think about adding a bit more space to instruments and stuff.


If you you or anyone could add any input to my song would be awesome.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1343548
#6
Quote by RedFez64
it does need some vocals, even a crap vocal just distorted would add a lot to the song, other than that yeah it's good guitar playing, okay production i think but think about adding a bit more space to instruments and stuff.


If you you or anyone could add any input to my song would be awesome.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1343548


Nice, I like that style.
#7
Its great, relaxing, it original, its not like when you say " oh, it sounds like ...." , by the way, if you dont feel like putting vocals, its up to you, great instrumental, and also, its really hard to put lyrics to an instrumental song, id rather write lyrics, and put some music to it. Great work.