#1
Hi,

I know I'm far from being a good singer, but would appreciate some constructive criticism (C4C) on this new video of mine (i.e. no "you suck" comments, useful ones however would be appreciated).

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5_OWq54gmOk

Thanks
Adam Black 12 String
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#2
Anyone?
Adam Black 12 String
Alesis X Guitar
Epiphone DR-200ce
Italia Maranello Standard
Fender American Deluxe Strat

Digitech Whammy
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Boss RC-2
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Sound City 20 Watt Valve
#3
Quote by Mono85
exellent effort imo, the solo could have used a few more hammer ons n pulls to make it flow it more though. oh and the video rocks!


Thanks mate :-)
Let me know if there are any recordings of yours that you want me to look at.
Adam Black 12 String
Alesis X Guitar
Epiphone DR-200ce
Italia Maranello Standard
Fender American Deluxe Strat

Digitech Whammy
Vox Crybaby
Boss RC-2
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Sound City 20 Watt Valve
#4
Anyone else?
Adam Black 12 String
Alesis X Guitar
Epiphone DR-200ce
Italia Maranello Standard
Fender American Deluxe Strat

Digitech Whammy
Vox Crybaby
Boss RC-2
Boss DS-1

Sound City 20 Watt Valve
#5
Quote by dwally89
Anyone else?

When you flood the forum with your own threads you won't be getting many replies. The top 12 threads on my page are all by you. Try commenting on other people's threads, then leaving a link to ONE of yours (not twelve). Bumping, on the other hand, is against the forum rules and is generally frowned upon, so don't do it.


To crit the song, I think this is one of the better ones that you've done. The singing is much better in this one than the others.
#6
Quote by samick007
When you flood the forum with your own threads you won't be getting many replies. The top 12 threads on my page are all by you. Try commenting on other people's threads, then leaving a link to ONE of yours (not twelve). Bumping, on the other hand, is against the forum rules and is generally frowned upon, so don't do it.


To crit the song, I think this is one of the better ones that you've done. The singing is much better in this one than the others.


Ok, thanks
Let me know if you want me to look/listen to any of your songs
Adam Black 12 String
Alesis X Guitar
Epiphone DR-200ce
Italia Maranello Standard
Fender American Deluxe Strat

Digitech Whammy
Vox Crybaby
Boss RC-2
Boss DS-1

Sound City 20 Watt Valve